Actually, I want to say I really hate writing. I remember that in my high school I usually spend hours to write a short article for my writing class. And now journal is a challenge for me as well. I just do not know what to write about. Before I get inspiration, I usually sit in my room and do nothing. And the reason why I can’t write maybe is I am the person who truly doesn’t know how express my own feelings. Although I hate writing, I enjoy the ESL class a lot. This is my favorite class since I have come to the U.S. The class is fun and useful. Teacher is excellent and students are really humorous. And I have learned many writing skills that I believe will improve my writing a lot. Especially the class we learned how to look up useful information for our research paper is really important for me. That was the first time I noticed how powerful our school library is.
Although I hate writing, I really admire the people who can write a thoughtful article, and I want to be one of them. So I’d love to continue my study in the writing. I always think my thought is like a white paper that has nothing on it. And what I want to do is draw a beautiful picture on it. I think I should read more English book, and learn more writing skills. And I really want my ESL 114 teacher can teach my ESL 115. I want to learn more things from her.
Sunday, April 25, 2010
Friday, April 2, 2010
will humans always be superior to machines?
This is a really interesting topic I saw in a book. I am a huge fan of fiction movies, and I have seen countless of roborts try to development their own kingdom and be the masters of humans. Nevertheless, in the real world, I think humans will always be superior to machines. First of all, machines are invinted by humans. Humans create machines and use them as a tool of life, such as cars, toy robortand video games. Alought they are creative and powerful, they are just tools for entertainment or transportation. Without humans, they are nothing. Secondly, all the machines don't have their own intelligence. They just follow a serious of orders that humans give them. And it's really hard to create a intelligent creature, because humanselves are really complicated and sophisticated. Thirdly, on the other hand, it's presuptuous to assert with confidence that humans will always maintain their superior status over their machies, because the potentiality is unpredictable, maybe one day humans can create some machinces with emotion, which would be in the far future.
Sunday, March 14, 2010
What I live for
Recently I read a article named what I live. This is a question I thought about for a long time.
When I was young, I thought I live for happiness. If I can play with friends whole day, that would be best way of living. When I grow a bit old, I think people live for creating some new thing. Because that time i was so interested in the science class, I thought people who can create new device like computer or some super machine is really successful.Therefore, I thought becoming a man like that is the goal of living. When i get in high school, I thought people live for help others. My father is a person like that. He is such a doctor that always take the health of his patient the most important thing. He did almost five surgeries everyday, which is almost twice than other doctors in China. He did that because he had a huge number of patient waiting for him to cure their disease, and he didn't want them to wait for too long. So he gave up his own spare time to help them. I think my father is a great man.After reading this article ,I thought I should be a person describe in the book. It said that"Three passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and the unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. These passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in a wayward course, over a deep ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despair."
It is really a great summary for what people live for. When I grow older, I think I can understand it more clearly
Thursday, March 4, 2010
outline for the contrast and compare essay
thesis statement: big city and small town are good living place for different people.
topic sentence 1: they have different transportation system
details:
big city have more bus and taxi, also have airplane and ships.On the one hand.his is very convenient for people to travel or go crossing the country; on the other hand, it produce too much pollution and noise.
In contrast,small town doesn't have so much cars as well as ships and airplane. Although the transportation is not that good for small town, they have a better environment without noise and air pollution
topic sentence 2: they have different environment
details:big city has more people and less tress, but small town have less people and more plants.living in big city is kind of crowded, however, living in small town is not that crowded. Also people in big city have limited living space because the house is expensive. Compare with big city, people can buy big house and walk to work, because the town is small.
topic sentence 3: they offer different jobs
details: big city have more chance to get a high-pay job, because many big companies is in the city. At the same time, big cities have better transportation system.It's easier for people to do big business.
nevertheless,small town only offer some regular jobs. The jobs in small town is less competitive, because there are not so many people here.
topic sentence 1: they have different transportation system
details:
big city have more bus and taxi, also have airplane and ships.On the one hand.his is very convenient for people to travel or go crossing the country; on the other hand, it produce too much pollution and noise.
In contrast,small town doesn't have so much cars as well as ships and airplane. Although the transportation is not that good for small town, they have a better environment without noise and air pollution
topic sentence 2: they have different environment
details:big city has more people and less tress, but small town have less people and more plants.living in big city is kind of crowded, however, living in small town is not that crowded. Also people in big city have limited living space because the house is expensive. Compare with big city, people can buy big house and walk to work, because the town is small.
topic sentence 3: they offer different jobs
details: big city have more chance to get a high-pay job, because many big companies is in the city. At the same time, big cities have better transportation system.It's easier for people to do big business.
nevertheless,small town only offer some regular jobs. The jobs in small town is less competitive, because there are not so many people here.
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
contrast and compare paragraph
The left clock and right clock are similar in shape.Also they both point at same time. But there are still some differences, the left clock is like liquid,but the right clock is like glass. Moreover, the right clock is in a painting, but the left one is in a real world. To me, the most similarity is that the two clocks give me a strong feeling about the time is going by very fast.
Monday, March 1, 2010
avatar
I saw Avatar few days ago in China, one of the blockbuster in those days.I think I haven't seen this story hundred times, but no one like this. The 3d visual effect is so impressive, according the newspaper, I know this movie have the greatest 3D effect in all the science-fiction movies. I believe everyone enjoy the visual experience, no doubt.
As for the story, some of the "inspirations" and "creation" are so creative and incredible. I cannot use any words to describe the spectacular scene of the movie. People can only feel it by watch it in the movie theater. It is really a great movie. And everything in that world is amazing and beautiful. I particularly like the plants and creature which are around by light..
It's really great movie that no one can miss it.
As for the story, some of the "inspirations" and "creation" are so creative and incredible. I cannot use any words to describe the spectacular scene of the movie. People can only feel it by watch it in the movie theater. It is really a great movie. And everything in that world is amazing and beautiful. I particularly like the plants and creature which are around by light..
It's really great movie that no one can miss it.
Friday, February 26, 2010
outline
thesis statement:destroy the habitat of other creatures will end human beings life
1.people destroy other creatures' habitat, because we want to develop our society.
details:
in order to gain more lumber, people go to forest and cut trees. But forest,especially the jungle ,is the most critical habitat for creatures. They have a large quantity of different species. The damage done by people on forest make many creatures homeless and die out.
also people are drilling the oil from the deep sea, the oil pollution is an overwhelming disaster for sea animals, because of the outflow of oil, they can't breathe and eventually die.
2.people should notice that these creatures are the food to other creatures.
details:
take the bee for example, they pollinate the crop and many other vegetable, which are food to the animals and human. If people continue abuse wrong way to cultivate the bee, this will cause big effect on the bee's gene and make them have problem breeding. when bees are fewer, then the vegetable and crops are fewer. Other animals who eat them will die.
3. destory them equals destory the food chain of the biosystem.
deails:
if people make some species die out, other spieces will be affected, at last the whole system will be affected. Although it's not a big problem now, it will have great effects in the future.
4. human beings are also part of the system.
details:
human beings are also living in the ecosystem, without other creatures human can't live
5.conclusion: without other creatures, human beings can not live. So human will die out at last
1.people destroy other creatures' habitat, because we want to develop our society.
details:
in order to gain more lumber, people go to forest and cut trees. But forest,especially the jungle ,is the most critical habitat for creatures. They have a large quantity of different species. The damage done by people on forest make many creatures homeless and die out.
also people are drilling the oil from the deep sea, the oil pollution is an overwhelming disaster for sea animals, because of the outflow of oil, they can't breathe and eventually die.
2.people should notice that these creatures are the food to other creatures.
details:
take the bee for example, they pollinate the crop and many other vegetable, which are food to the animals and human. If people continue abuse wrong way to cultivate the bee, this will cause big effect on the bee's gene and make them have problem breeding. when bees are fewer, then the vegetable and crops are fewer. Other animals who eat them will die.
3. destory them equals destory the food chain of the biosystem.
deails:
if people make some species die out, other spieces will be affected, at last the whole system will be affected. Although it's not a big problem now, it will have great effects in the future.
4. human beings are also part of the system.
details:
human beings are also living in the ecosystem, without other creatures human can't live
5.conclusion: without other creatures, human beings can not live. So human will die out at last
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